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1. Compare the original and the versions with track changes. Then, describe the
types of errors identified by the editor.
2. Compare the edited version with Track Changes and describe how the editor
improved the errors.
3. Compare the original and edited versions to identify changes made to improve
the text.
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4. Summarise the observed improvement of the text.
5. Compile your summary and write the first draft of your report.
6. Exchange your report with your classmate for editing.
7. Proofread the final draft. Then, present your report to class for improvements.
8. Work on the comments for improvements.
9. Discuss the suggestions. Then, write and proofread your final draft.

(c) Read, identify errors and rewrite each of the given texts correctly.

Part 1

who knows about tomorow , is it you, is it your neghbour, is it your parents, no. nobody
knows. as am speaking know, i can see your worries about tomorrow. however, you a
still saving money for tomorow. you a really giving a lot to the tomorow you don’t no
and make the today you no starving. a you sure that you a worried. am worried that you
a not worried. as long as you a human beings: you a not worried? you buy land, cars,
houses and a lot more you will take them nowhere. yet you sit there and tell me you
don’t no tomorow and you a worried. my friend, just tell me that you no am not going
to ask you. after all, i just live now, not even today. for me tomorow is the next century
and am already in my late sixties. i seen many of yo type, you the type of those knowing
tomoro are the biggest problem in this planet. robbery, theft, bribery and corruption
is all problem you cause. you know why? you save for the tomorow you know but
pretend not to know. anyway, just ignore me i talk nonsense. am an empty noisemaker.
seriously, i no nobody knows tomorow.

Part 2

the winding up part of his speech contained some interesting bitter words as he alerted
the members as i was carefully reading the speech my eyes landed on the paragraph i
was looking for it was written as follows ladies and gentlemen our meeting focuses on
a serious agenda which has been our major concern over the last five years we have
been discussing for years now but the implementation part has been our major obstacle
in our todays discussion it wont be bad if some of us are taken responsible for not
implementing the resolutions of our previous meetings suffice to say that negligence
among some of us has caused pains which they have not been sharing since we leave

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