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          He then asked the youngboy, What did you do my son? The boy responded, Sir, first
          of all thankyu for serving my soul, the man who disguise himself a police officer is a
          bully. I know him, he is one old boy from one of our camps. Last two weeks, he was
          arrested, I think he  killed the police office and taken the uniform. He promised to kill
          me because I’m the only reliable witness to make him lose the case. The man of god,
          speechlessly, took the yongboy to his car and off they went.
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