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He then asked the youngboy, What did you do my son? The boy responded, Sir, first
of all thankyu for serving my soul, the man who disguise himself a police officer is a
bully. I know him, he is one old boy from one of our camps. Last two weeks, he was
arrested, I think he killed the police office and taken the uniform. He promised to kill
me because I’m the only reliable witness to make him lose the case. The man of god,
speechlessly, took the yongboy to his car and off they went.
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